Friday, February 11, 2011

Rip Van Doyle

Jake, with a bunch of buddies, goes into the woods just past the Goulds and hits the booze half hard. After drifting off while sitting on a tree trunk Jake comes too many years after he first went into the woods.

When Jake finally makes it back to St. John's he tries to find remnants of his old life.

After riding around on the hover bus for the better part of the afternoon Jake finally manages to track down the married Des and Tinny. Eventually he is also able to find Leslie, who has remained unmarried in case Jake ever returned. Unfortunately the newly revitalized Jake is not interested in a retired cop living on a pension.

Before you know, Jake is back at the private detecting, though his effectiveness is rather limited as he is unfamiliar with the ways of the mid-21st century technology.

7 comments:

peadarhogan said...

You'll be incorporating time machines into the plot holes in no time.

Cameron said...

Aren't hover buses enough?

peadarhogan said...

I reread this post and realized you were already there- congratulations, and welcome to a better world, where all you need is a fancy looking metal box, and you've got infinite plot hole possibilities.

I'm really tired and hating Dewey.

Cameron said...

Melvil Doyle?

Cameron said...

AACR Doyle?

peadarhogan said...

Jake Dewey

Cameron said...

Jake Dui - if we want to be true to part of history.