Monday, March 7, 2011

Run on Doyle

Shortly after receiving a tip about the location of reward-bearing suspect Jake and Mal jump into Jake's mint blue GTO and head for Blackhead, the supposed location of the wanted criminal, though before they are able to head out they run into Des and Tinny and encourage them to some background checks on the perp in question, a task assignment that allows them to head out, hopefully uninterrupted, for a few hours while they try to apprehend the wanted to-be convicted felon, though, of course, before they are able to capture the accused law breaker they have to engage in a high-speed car chase through Blackhead and Shea Heights.

2 comments:

peadarhogan said...

Too many commas...

Cameron said...

There are. I was too rushed to do a good job of it.